User:Gravycajun/Afterlife/Connor Aiken Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Gravycajun


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Gravycajun/Afterlife?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Afterlife

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall this is a very broad topic that should be fairly easy to find something that other people have missed. Weather that is just grammar or a whole new topic, it is completely possible. For example the mediumship section is incredibly small and could be expanded on and you could tell what mediums do and how it relates to the afterlife. Right now all it says is that they contact dead people. You can expand on the how. It can be small stuff like that to help edit the article. Good luck.