User:Gray0696/Aerobic anoxygenic phototrophic bacteria/Fensk110 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Gray0696


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Gray0696/Aerobic_anoxygenic_phototrophic_bacteria?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Aerobic anoxygenic phototrophic bacteria

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think what you have is a good start and expands well on the article that already exists. The writing is clear and concise; getting the point across without being over complicated. It also looks like it has a good source.

I wonder if you might consider adding a section in the article with images/diagrams of these bacteria just to help the reader visualize. It might be nice to go a little more in depth about the different kinds.