User:Gray0696/Aerobic anoxygenic phototrophic bacteria/WRICE00 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Bixle023, Gray0696


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Gray0696/Aerobic_anoxygenic_phototrophic_bacteria?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Aerobic anoxygenic phototrophic bacteria

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hello, so far the content you have looks good! It fills in a gap in the main article as it is lacking how to isolate the bacteria. The paragraphs you have now are well structured, but I would recommend adding more citations as I only see the one so far. I noticed in your third paragraph you abbreviate aerobic anoxygenic phototrophic bacteria with "AAP", but the original article abbreviates it as AAPB.