User:Graybeboy/La razón de mi vida/Grizz99 Peer Review

General info
Graybeboy
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Graybeboy/La_raz%C3%B3n_de_mi_vida?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):La razón de mi vida

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The original article provides little information of substance. However, the new additions proposed do plenty to further information on Eva Peron's autobiography. As such, everything added is great. As a reader, I think more information in line with what has previously been added is what I want. Great Work!

As for suggestions for the lead, I do not have any really. I think the current lead does a fine job of introducing the topic. If anything, the last sentence about the government making the work required could be dropped. But dropping it or not, as I see it, does not substantially effect the lead.