User:Graybeboy/La razón de mi vida/PspOU Peer Review

General info
(Grayson) Graybeboy
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Graybeboy/La_razón_de_mi_vida?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):La razón de mi vida

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead not currently updated but stated to be edited at some point. Unedited lead clearly states what article is about.

Content is detailed and is relevant to article, added much needed details about the book.

Tone is neutral, providing a neutral view towards the book and does not over or under represent.

Content is reliably sourced with much greater detail compared to the original source. Content is diverse in authors, they are older sources however but considering the book is old they are accurate to the article's content.

Content is easy to understand. "the book aggrandizes Eva, as could be expected of an autobiography" sounds a bit aggressive. No issues regarding grammar.

Overall the content is well written in the places that were edited, no image but we haven't reached that stage yet. The quote provided above sounds a bit aggressive towards autobiographies and feels like more of an opinion so it should most likely be re-worded.