User:GreatDane15/Canine parvovirus/Lilsharplilac Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * I am reviewing GreatDane15's article
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: User:GreatDane15/sandbox

Lead
Guiding questions:

There is no lead on the sandbox of this user. There are headings, but they are small and are easily read as part of the article additions that are being made.

Content
Guiding questions:

The content that is being added is all relevant and explained very well. There is a lot of information being added that is going to be a great asset to the article. This user wants to add in more sources for the article, which is a great idea.

Tone and Balance
The content added is clear and concise. The views are neutral. There are no segments of the viewpoints that are underrepresented or overrepresented. The balance of the article additions are great.

Sources and References
Guiding questions:

All of the new information being added is through reliable sources that are secondary.

The sources are current and reliable.

The two sources cited are from two completely different places.

Organization
Guiding questions:

The content that is going to be added is clear and concise. It is easy to read.

There are no grammatical or spelling errors on the additions to the article.

The content is separated into sections that make it easy to know what each section will be about.

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * I believe that the article is more complete with the additions made by this user.
 * The strengths of this article are in the complexity of the additions. This user wants to add more links to certain terms in the article, give more information on the diagnosis and treatment of the article, and give the article more sources.
 * This content can be improved by adding an image to the article. The article only has one image on it.