User:Greedgood+1s/America's Blood Centers/Yedlo Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Greedgood+1s


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Greedgood+1s/America's_Blood_Centers?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * America's Blood Centers

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

As of right now, I don't see anything in the person's sandbox, so I will just wait and post feedback when I see it!

Sorry my previous updates were in my own sandbox and not User:Greedgood+1s/America's Blood Centers/