User:Greekazoid/Eudaimonia/SpaceVarangian Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Greekazoid


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Greekazoid/Eudaimonia?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Eudaimonia

Evaluate the drafted changes
There is no lead in your contribution. Could you add something that relates to your contribution and how this concept contribution to later philosophers' ideas?

Overall structure looks great and I think that it balances the ideas of each ancient philosophers perspective.

I think that the balance is good, however the part on positive psychology is eudaimonia is a little short and I'm wondering if it should be added into a different section or if there's anything you could add to it? Although the lead could be longer given the overall length of the article.

Neutrality seems overall good, but at points in the part about Nicomachean ethics it could be made more clear that these are Aristotle's philosophical ideas and not facts about life. Could you alter some of these phrasings so that it comes off more neutral.

I think that your addition of sources is great and could help this article immensely, especially given the several flags on it. I like that you added more recent sources. Readers can see how ideas like this are greater built upon in modern academic circles and what these historical ideas mean to modern philosophers. They all seem to be attributed accurately based on what I read as well.