User:GreenPanda55/Magdalena Suarez Frimkess/2wsdfr56yhnji90 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

GreenPanda55


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:GreenPanda55/Magdalena_Suarez_Frimkess?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The article is written in an informative and neutral manner. Most citations are not placed as footnotes but rather precede the first word of the sentence. I think that the proper Wikipedia format is to cite at the end of the last word of the sentence as a footnote.

I think that the "Art" section should be written in a paragraph format rather than a bullet point list to adhere to Wikipedia standards.

However, the Exhibitions section can be in bullet point format, I believe.

All citations are reliable sources and links work properly.

Overall, this article is very well-written and I believe that with a few tweaks it could be ready to be published.