User:Greenapplewatermelon/Parent-in-law/Allanou2023 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Greenapplewatermelon


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Greenapplewatermelon/Parent-in-law


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The article drafted by Greenapplewatermelon provides the required sources and is confirmed to be active links. The paragraph is concise and easy to read. This article is free of grammatical errors. There seems to be a minor bias presented toward the negative aspects of parent-in-law relationships. There could be the inclusion of a researchable citation regarding the conflict being more prevalent in women than men to add reliability to the claim. Though this article is well written, one aspect that could improve the overall quality of the article would be to have a separate section for stereotypes of these types of relationships.