User:Greenhorse0828/Wissahickon Creek/RangerRick104 Peer Review

General Information

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Greenhorse0828


 * Link to draft you're reviewing.
 * User:Greenhorse0828/Wissahickon Creek


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists).
 * Wissahickon Creek - Wikipedia

Evaluate the Drafted Changes.
I thought that what you added in the first paragraph is helpful information and well-placed. However, for a more neutral tone for your edit, you could change, "To get a permit you have to fill out an application and they cost $35." to "Applications for permits cost $35".

Your "One trail to hike on" edit is a good change from the biased original.

I also agree with the section of E.A. Poe's story. It is not from a neutral viewpoint and is unnecessary for the remainder of the article.