User:Greenstudents123/Effect of Climate Change on Wine/Jojostudent8 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Greenstudents123, Pele140646, Newyorkcitystudent, LuluMarie2020


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Greenstudents123/Effect_of_Climate_Change_on_Wine?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

Evaluate the drafted changes
Peer review

Complete your peer review exercise below, providing as much constructive criticism as possible. The more detailed suggestions you provide, the more useful it will be to your classmate. Make sure you consider each of the following aspects:

Lead
Guiding questions:


 * Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer?
 * Make sure to insert your draft under draft and not publish it just yet.
 * Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic?
 * Yes, the first two sentences accurately describe the articles topic.
 * Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections?
 * I would add one more sentence that goes onto explain the major sections you go into further
 * Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article?
 * Nope, information on the lead is presented in the article.
 * Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed?
 * Yes, it is concise and gets the point across.

Content
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added relevant to the topic?
 * Yes, so far the content is relevant to the topic! Could add another section about change in wine consumption? That could be interesting
 * Is the content added up-to-date?
 * Yes, all the articles are from 2019 and later
 * Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong?
 * I would add a little more to the section on grape quality, because it is way shorter than the rest

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added neutral?
 * Tone is mostly very neutral, content attempts to persuade the reader in favor that climate change is causing changes in grape and wine, but use lots of evidence to show this.

Sources and References
Guiding questions:


 * Make sure to use mainly/all scholarly articles and make sure to cite every piece of information you use from the sources on your page.

Organization
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read?
 * Yes, everything is very easy and clear to read
 * Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors?
 * No, but some words can be changed into more efficient words
 * Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic?
 * Content is very well organized and broken down into sections

Images and Media
Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media


 * Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic?
 * I see now images, but I believe adding some would greatly benefit and enhance your topic that you are discussing.

For New Articles Only
If the draft you're reviewing is for a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.


 * Does the article meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements - i.e. Is the article supported by 2-3 reliable secondary sources independent of the subject?
 * Yes
 * How exhaustive is the list of sources? Does it accurately represent all available literature on the subject?
 * Use more scholarly articles if you can!
 * Does the article link to other articles so it is more discoverable?
 * Yes!

Overall impressions

 * Everything is looking great so far, just keep adding a bit more, make sure to cite your information and fidn more scholarly articles.