User:Greenstudents123/Effect of Climate Change on Wine/Yellow78 Peer Review

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Evaluate the drafted changes
All of the topics in this article are very interesting and apply very well to the topic. It was a nice touch to add how all of the effects of climate change affect the price of wine and the taste of it. All of the article is neutral and there is no bias present within it. Some of the sections could use more information and are underrepresented like the changes in grape quality and the changes in wine production sections. It would be nice to see additional information after listing the changes in wine regions, like a summary of how all the points listed come together to create the big impact that it does. Another addition that would be helpful is adding links to other wikipedia articles with some important key words in the article. All of the current sources check out as a reliable reference source. They all have been written in the past four years which makes them viable sources with the dates published. They all seem like neutral sources that have no bias, just facts about climate change and grapes. It looks like there is a lot of information within the article that has information that needs a source. A lot of the facts do not have a source. This would especially include the changes in the grape ripening section and the changes in the wine prices section. Overall, this looks like a very good first draft to the article. The largest room for improvement is filling out the sections and improving sources. Once that is filled out it looks like this page will be really good.