User:Greer365/James V. Neel/HunterH uab Peer Review

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1) Of particular interest to Neel was an understanding of the human genome in an evolutionary light, a concept he addressed in his fieldwork with cultural anthropologist Napoleon Chagnon among the Yanomamo and Xavante in Brazil and Venezuela.

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2) a source for the fabrication proof of El dorado could be provided.

3) A research section could be added containing all of his published articles and summaries of them.