User:Greer365/James V. Neel/Mpankey Peer Review

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James V. Neel was geneticist who played a key role in the field of genetic epidemiology. He studied sickle-cell disease, Thalassemia and the effects of Radiation on the survivors of the Hiroshima bombing.

As of writing there have been two edits each from MckinlieGray and Greer365. These edits have consisted of the initial pull of existing parts of the article into the sandbox and as well as some initial grammar changes and addition of Acronyms as part of organization names

Current edits are in a good place for initial edits, but there is no new content at the moment. Reading the article brings a few content gaps to mind. A section on the overall impact of James V. Neel would be helpful and bring this article in line with some others of important historical figures. The lead mentions his work with Sickle-cell disease, Thalassemia, and with survivors of Hiroshima, but there are no sections elaborating on this. The section on the "Darkness in Elderado" scandal/book could be its own subsection for better readability.