User:Griib/Mayumi Yoshida (Actor)/Jmacmac Peer Review

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I am reviewing Griib's work.


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 * User:Griib/Mayumi Yoshida (Actor)
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I have not heard of Mayumi Yoshida before and so I am interested to see what you come up with in the end. I like that you are focusing on an actress that has forged a career outside of the Hollywood spotlight. We here in Canada and the United States often get caught up in the idea that if someone is not famous particularly in the United States then they have not actually made it, when other parts of the world have thriving entertainment industries that produces their own superstars. I could not find a page with the same name as yours, but I did find another page for a Mayumi Yoshida and if I am correct in the assumption that this is the same person, will you eventually incorporate your work into this page or create a new page? The page that I found only has her filmography at the moment and so it would be nice to add some more details of her biography to the page.