User:Grilledtandoorismoke/Data Divide/JudyMiao Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Grilledtandoorismoke


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kaitlinabeele/Data_Ecosystem?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Data Divide Leading Section


 * Good definition and introduction! It would be helpful to mention the (data) types, and categories in the data divide with different impacts in a subsection or the text.

o How about the data collection process in various infrastructures and platforms (list some examples of infrastructures)?

Basis in the Digital Divide


 * Introduce the history of the digital drive with specific years (periods) to demonstrate the evolution of digital drives, like policies changing the definition of digital drive from a different perspective (social, political, or economic).
 * Is there any difference between a digital drive and a data drive (How does a data drive come through a digital drive?)
 * Who is influenced by the digital drive? Maybe give a specific example of a digital drive with the general consequence.

Body Paragraph -- Aspects


 * For the body structure of “Aspects”, I suggest you may divide the aspects into three topic sections with some subsections. For example, infrastructures are a section, and smart city is a subsection.


 * What issues can big data technologies manage in urban city centers, and for what purposes?


 * Potential suggestions or recommendations can be added to reduce the data divide based on findings in a new section to summarize and conclude your article on the data divide.

Reference List


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Overall Comments: Andrea, you did an excellent job on your article with comprehensive content and structures. I enjoyed reading data divide article, and I hope my peer-reviewed comments and suggestions will be helpful! Please let me know if there is anything unclear!