User:Grilledtandoorismoke/Data Divide/Yiwang13 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Grilledtandoorismoke


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Grilledtandoorismoke/Data_Divide?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hello Andrea:

Nice Job! I enjoyed the clear, detailed explanation of your topic (Data Divide), which is easy to follow and understand. Here is some detailed feedback. Hope it helps.


 * The structure of the article is clear, but I consider that the title "Aspects" could be changed. The three sections under this title discuss three different topics; it would be a good idea to separate the three sections if there is no suitable title.
 * Does the digital divide mostly occur between the public sector and individuals, the private sector and individuals, or the public and private sectors? Can you add a bit of explanation in the definition section to clarify it? Or have a separate section about the relationship.
 * For the "Basis in the Digital Divide" section, it would be helpful to add some information about the origin of the data divide. For example, who first proposed the concept or discovered the problem？
 * Are the "haves" and the "have-nots." divided by wealth as in the normal standard? Or is it the level of data access? Or this could be a comparison between countries or regions.
 * "Several technologies are enabled across municipalities ......" It's better to add some examples of the technologies.
 * "Smart cities claim to assist the public but have been critiqued for putting capital and government needs over citizens." Same. Are there any examples of Criticism or protest?
 * Are there any experts starting to find solutions for the data divide? If yes, adding a "solution" section will be helpful. After reading your article, I was concerned about the impact of the data divide. It is a serious problem.