User:Grinch Feet/Architectural mythology/Big.Empty.Space Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * GrinchFeet


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 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Architectural mythology
 * Architectural mythology

Evaluate the drafted changes
The writing could be more clear in the lead section. I only understood what I was going to be learning about after the additional information in the Ancient Greek Architecture section. I feel like it's underdeveloped and it could be more specific. In the article, someone wrote "Not all stories surrounding an architectural work incorporate a level of myth." but the Title is Architectural Mythology. Maybe not to other readers, but this statement is a little confusing for me.

The only thing in this article after the lead is Ancient Greek Architecture. While I think it could keep the theme of cultures and the arrangement of information makes sense, I think some information about other cultures other than Greece might be useful for readers to understand the topic more thoroughly. There's no biased information and the images used in the article are good. However, maybe explain why the image of The Tower of Babel is there and how it relates to architectural mythology.

I found the majority of the new information that I added to my article in the same sources that we're already used. Maybe go through the books in the references and try to find more information about different cultures. It doesn't look like any of the books are specifically about Greece so you may find information about new cultures in those. All the authors and publications in the sources are credible except for Donald Strong. I'm not saying he isn't credible but I'm not able to find much information about him and I don't have the book physically so it's hard for me to tell. All the other authors are experts and have degrees in architecture so they are credible.