User:Grindlet/Cordilleran ice sheet/Slaro2025 Peer Review

General info
Grindlet
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Grindlet/Cordilleran ice sheet
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Cordilleran ice sheet

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall it was good! I just have a few comments/ questions:

Content:

- you did a great job adding to this section and really filling it out with useful information

- Do you plan on making edits to all/other the sections within the current wikipedia page? I see that you went further with the thawing section but am wondering if you plan to do it to the rest of the sections? If you only plan on working on only some sections, I would recommend trying to add more to the current "Refugia" section as it is pretty sparse at the moment.

- In the first sentence of the "Thawing" section, I would recommend changing one of the "it is believed" with something else, it just sounds a bit redundant to start the section with

- if there is any information out there on roughly when the ice sheet started to thaw, I would include that in this section as well.

Organization:

- organization is good! This is only just one section of the article, but the section itself has a clear flow from start to finish

Images/ Media:

- I liked how you included that landforms came from this ice sheet thawing! It might be interesting to add in any pictures containing these landforms in present day

Tone and Balance:

- good, reliable sources and neutral content