User:Groggler/Flux method/Meghanwu Peer Review

General info
Les42342, Groggler
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Sandbox Draft
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Article:

Evaluate the drafted changes
- neutral article.

- lead introduction is a great overview of what this article is about.

- could look into more sources on this topic.

- the current article is a bit messy and wordy, thus the draft is a good rewrite.

- could add a diagram of the flux method for readers to visualize it easier.

- i like the addition of self-flux, however i think this assignment needs a word count of 500-1000 (from the portion you added).

- you could possibly dive further into the research of the flux method.

- i believe you will be finishing this sentence:

"tin in the growth of PtSn4, antimony in the growth of CrSb2, and lead in the growth of SOMETHING.", but you could also diver further into the self-flux method for specific growths (ex: PtSn4)!