User:Grognak3/Trifolium hybridum/Plantexpert3000 Peer Review

Lead notes

-Lead is already pretty good but add a sentence or two summarizing what you added. (toxicity and use in horticulture)

Content

-In use and horticulture section, the first sentence is a bit long and run-on. Maybe split it into two sentences.

-Very good neutrality and tone.

-Change toxic effects to toxic effect or remove "a".

-Good balance of sources.

Sources

-All sources are high quality.

-Good job using a diverse group of sources.

-Use another source in the toxicity section.

Rubric Stuff

-Make sure to use one more source in the toxicity section to get the A+.

-Check for grammar/spelling errors.

-If you decide to add an image, the article could use an image of the entire plant. It just has flower pictures currently.

General info
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Evaluate the drafted changes
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