User:Gros04/Mille Lacs Lake/Perso269 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Gros04


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Editing User:Gros04/Mille Lacs Lake - Wikipedia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Mille Lacs Lake - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
To start, I think that all of the sections you added were very relevant except for historical effects of human activity section. I thought that section was very good just that it could maybe be moved or added to another section. The content was very neutral and unbiased and I thought that every aspect of the section you worked on was equally represented. Your information was also very well sourced with claims being backed up with good sources. The links all worked and none of the sources were of low quality. The article was also well written and I felt that the images added to the article and provided context. Overall great job, the only feedback would be to maybe move the last paragraph to a different section.