User:Grrl89/Dilly Dally/Tinseldeaconpo Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) Grrl89


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Grrl89/Dilly DallyLink to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * This page is extremely well formatted and shows in-depth research and information regarding the band's discography, formation, and rise to fame. There is a clear introductory sentence that accurately depicts the basic/important facts about the band.
 * Grammar is correct and contains minimal to no spelling errors.
 * You cite many sources which is good, and you include more than one in every section, which shows that your research is veritable and presents different perspectives. Throughout the entire page you remain neutral and never demonstrate any sort of bias, whether it be negative or positive. You list specific names, dates, and moments within in their career, which helps to clearly and accurately represent the band's career.
 * Although this article is very thorough and unbiased, it would be nice to include a "personal life" section which speaks on the band member's personal endeavours before and during their career. I feel that a personal aspect regarding the band members is lacking from the page, which prevents the reader from gaining an understanding of who the band really is and how each individual member conducted themselves. I realize that this is not crucial information, but is helpful towards understanding the band and who they were throughout their career.
 * This article does link to other articles which makes it more discoverable and it follows the pattern of most popular wikipedia pages. It would be familiar to any common wiki users
 * I wish the photo used included a clear representation of all band members rather than focusing on only one.
 * The sectioning of this article is very clear but I feel as though the headings that include "years" seem a little off brand for typical wiki headings. Maybe more straightforward and concise headings would work better. Perhaps just stating the years and then stating underneath that a certain album was released during that time would work nicely.
 * Overall, this page seems extremely well thought out and properly follows the requirements of the assignment, and of Wikipedia itself.