User:Gsch23/Narrative therapy/Kayoff Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Gsch23


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Gsch23/Narrative_therapy?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Narrative therapy

Evaluate the drafted changes
Your topic seems really interesting! While your article seems to have a lot of information, I think there is still some things you could add going forward. Some of the sections have less than others, so if possible, you could consider expanding on sections like the "re-membering" sections, or the "absent but implicit" section. You could also consider adding more to the history sections, such as what each of the people mentioned contributed or why narrative therapy was developed. I think it would also be interesting to explain or outline what the phases of treatment can look like with this type of therapy and how the tree of life practice works. The overall article sticks to neutrality, so if you stick to that tone, I think you should be fine throughout the process. There were parts that need additional or edited citations, so that could be considered when rewording or supporting certain statements.