User:Gsch23/Narrative therapy/Mpatel48 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Gsch23


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Gsch23/Narrative_therapy?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Narrative therapy

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Hi! I have noticed you have not had the chance to add to your article yet, but that is okay! I can provide you with some suggestions to improve the article. One source i recommend you to utilize is the UAB library database, you can easily find the secondary sources required for this assignment. I will provide a list of a few ideas that you could possibly expand on.

- First try to expand the lead a little, you can incorporate a few sentences with what you plan on adding to the article.

- An easy area to expand on would be the history, it is very brief right now.

- Another area would be the socio-political area. You can talk about how this relates to various equity gaps

Your article seems to be fairly new, you can provide better diction overall and find different areas that this topic could relate to. I look forward to your contributions in the future!