User:Gsch23/Narrative therapy/Tolber2K Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Gsch23


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Gsch23/Narrative_therapy?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Narrative therapy

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi! I can see that you may not have had a chance to take a look at your article just yet. The lead could use a touch up in the language to make it a bit more neutral, largely around the portion claiming it as a "social justice" approach. Furthermore, the history and background section looks to be severely lacking so that may be a great place to start at. Look for general synopses of the subject in peer reviewed medical journals to gain some much needed evidence.