User:Gschoner/Ban Non Wat/Sarpayton Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Gschoner


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Gschoner/Ban_Non_Wat?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Ban Non Wat

Evaluate the drafted changes
Your lead is strong and gives a very insightful overview of the sites and findings. I feel like I got a better idea of what would be found at Ban Non Wat and the history of the civilization that resided at Ban Non Wat. I really like how you organized the page, with a section discussing the Neolithic period, Bronze and Iron Age sections as well as your lead allows the page to flow and easier to follow and find information. The content is all relevant and it was easy to read and digest. This page had a very neutral tone which made it clear you were just providing facts and information rather than stating opinions. You've included several references which is great and you include them throughout your sections which is great and confirms that you have references for your facts.

Your writing is really easy to read and thoughts were articulated well, I think things to work on could be including pictures and maps, I think it only strengthens the page. I think having captions with pictures and making the page look aesthetically pleasing will strengthen your page as it gives visuals. I also think that including information on the modern day significance could be really interesting and relating it back to todays society regarding archaeological findings. I think if you wanted to you could even add a bit more to the Bronze and Iron Age sections maybe the influences each had and what we know to be dated back to these times from the findings at the site.