User:Gschultz1980/Boreal ecosystem/Izzy Eckert Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Gschultz1980


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Gschultz1980/Boreal_ecosystem?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Boreal ecosystem

Evaluate the drafted changes
I feel like the article that Grace is working on is not yet ready to be peer-reviewed, however, I will review what I can.

From what I can tell, there is only one additional sentence in her sandbox that would be new to the article. However, I am not sure the listed facts all come from as there is only one reference cited as of now. I think the lead is good especially the addition of the last sentence in the lead. I think the most important improvement that needs to be made is adding more resources which in turn means adding more content.

Looking at the original article, I think that there could be more sections added on in addition to "Climate Change Effects" and "Ecosystem Services".

I can see how the original article could use a lot of improvement. It has 16 sources already but could use some rewording and organization.