User:Gscott2844/Alfred D. Chandler Jr./Chloeellis12 Peer Review

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Gscott2844
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Gscott2844/Alfred D. Chandler Jr.
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Alfred D. Chandler Jr.

Evaluate the drafted changes
There is a really good amount of references already listed in the article. When I viewed the history of the article I could see that this is an article that was made from a while ago and not one that you created. Yet, your sandbox edit is the exact same as the article posted. I can not really tell what you added based on your sandbox, but I can by looking at the 'view history' of the article. If I have it wrong and you made this whole article yourself, great job! Based on the 'view history' I could see that you made changes to "The Visible Hand" and "Influence" section. Something that could be added to the article is external links to certain names or objects that people could clink on if they did not know what it was. The first two sections, Family and Life and Publications have a lot of great external links for people to click on. Overall the paragraphs seem good, the Family and Life sections seem much smaller than the rest of the articles and could use some more details. Great add ons.