User:Gsd7/Cap Tourmente National Wildlife Area/Milenaphilips Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Gsd7/Cap_Tourmente_National_Wildlife_Area?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Cap Tourmente National Wildlife Area

Evaluate the drafted changes
There is a lot of useful information that was added that had not been previously present in the article. Most of the added content is relevant and the references have been published recently. The added subheadings organize the material well. The content meets some of the 5 goal topics : information about the species found there, number of visitors and what they do there, historical use of the protected area. I think this article needs more references, specifically in the wildlife, park attractions, and challenges section - may be due to incompletion. Moreover, it might be beneficial to include population trends of the keystone species, some more information on the history, and any First Nations connections with the area if there are some. The location information could also maybe describe the neighbouring environment and what kind of biome/type of forests it includes. The sections on Wildlife and Challenges list information in a format that is usually not seen on Wikipedia, I think it would be better to incorporate the lists into sentences. Most of the grammar is fine, there are some minor grammar/punctuation issues in the Park attractions section. The tone of the article seems professional. More references need to be added, I think most of the information that was added does not have a citation. The information provided is a good mix of missing information and the original article is very sparse so I think they added a good variety but they need more information.