User:Gsims99/Punishment (psychology)/Isah1998 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Gsims99


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Gsims99/Punishment_%28psychology%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Punishment (psychology)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

The lead could include more information on what's to come in the article. Just a broad overview.

Content

The content has relevancy potential. The information you found needs to be reworded to better fit into one of the sections of the article as well as add more background information. The information should flow naturally with the information already present in the section. The type of reinforcement category for the punishment(time out) used should be added to your draft. Explaining that timeouts was used as punishment for stuttering could be more clear. The section on applied behavior analysis talks about the of use of punishment for neurological disorders. It would be good to briefly mention the results you found could be controversial as well. That would help tie your information in with the section. The content comes from reputable sources (secondary),but these sources are out of date. Wikipedia prefers if the information used has been published in the last 5 years.

Tone and Balance

The information you found is neutral

Sources and References

Sources you used are credible and easy to find. The links work. citation 1 and 3 are the same citation so you can remove one of them. Sources are out of the preferred date range of publication. Information found focuses on marginalized individuals(neurologic disorders).

Organization

Content is very specific and should be worded to better fit the article section. Relate to other information surrounding your addition. There are no grammar or spelling errors.

Overall Impressions

The information you found is quite interesting and could potentially be a good addition to the article. The information needs to fit into the article though and you also need to place the information.