User:Gsims99/Punishment (psychology)/Lindseyfturner106 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Gsims99)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Gsims99/Punishment_%28psychology%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
Punishment (psychology)



Evaluate the drafted changes
To begin, the topic you decided to read and expand on is extremely interesting and has so many aspects involved that would be worth exploring. I would recommend reading scholarly articles involving applied behavior analysis, or ABA, for more information on punishments. While the content you included is extremely detailed and is relevant to the original article, I would like to see more information under each sub-heading. The original article doesn't have too much information and I believe there is plenty more out there regarding each of the sub-headings provided already. The information you have on "Applications" of punishment is a great way to help individuals understand and apply it to real world settings. You do not seem to have a bias towards the subject and your resources are reliable but some are extremely out dated. Overall, your contribution is organized, easy to understand, and has no indication of persuading your readers.