User:Gsloan18/Diethyl sulfate/Rsvetlov Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Gsloan18


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Gsloan18/Diethyl sulfate


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Diethyl sulfate

Evaluate the drafted changes
To start, I assume you are keeping the previous information which is a great idea. The idea is to add information that is missing. References look good, most of them are from pubchem, one from EPA, one from cameochemicals.org, and one from the international agency for research for research on cancer (IARC).

1st Paragraph: You combined the two paragraphs, which goes well as the intro paragraph. I see you found references for the first and second sentences, nice. Can you find a refence for the 3rd/4th sentences, it looks like something you would get from a specific source.

Property: The sentence "It gets darker over time" could be worded differently and is a little short. Try linking chemical molecules to their wikipedia page.

Toxicology: Found missing reference, awesome. It is great that you added the carcinogenic information, maybe elaborate on the animal testing if you can. Maybe find any further effects it can on humans when it comes to being a possible carcinogen.

For the "Inhalation of this chemical" sentence, is there a reference for this information?

Preparation: Don't forget to re-add the refences that were there previously and sort them in the References section. I think you are missing a reference for the before last sentence on the purification process.

Overall, great job! A little bit of cleaning up with the references and a few of the sentences and it is ready to be contributed to the living document.