User:Gtrueong/Pearlfish/Gtrueong Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

TrevorCameron and Kgb dsb


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Pearleye
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Overall, the writing is informative and concise, providing a clear description of the pearleye fish and its unique visual system. There are uses of technical terms, which are explained in a way that is easy to understand. The description of the pearleye's appearance, behavior, and habitat is detailed enough to give the reader a good understanding of the fish, but not so much that it becomes overwhelming or boring. The writing is well-organized, engaging, and informative, making it an interesting read for anyone interested in marine biology or fish in general.