User:Guadalupequinones/La Mujer Moderna/Dooley1836 Peer Review

Peer Review

I wasn't able to find an original wiki page (expect on in spanish) so I am assuming this is a new wiki article.

-I think you lead is perfect and introduces the topic well

-Overall I felt like you provided a lot of context to the author (Hermila Galindo) in this beginning stage of your article. I think that you if you include some context about specific La Mujer Moderna articles it will focus in on your topic more.

-2 of your sources don't seem to have a working link

-the historical context section was very helpful to explain what was happening during this time to influence La Mujer Moderna works

-I think this is a great start and I hope you were able to find more articles from La Mujer Moderna to add in your next edits

-also so sorry this didn't upload correctly the first time I created the page!