User:Guancong lance li/Chinese Dama/Ic C0101 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Group of Guancong Lance Li


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Guancong%20lance%20li/Chinese_Dama?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The content so far is very informative, very neutral and supported by relevant sources. The draft started off with the media layer which I think is a very good idea since it is relatively more intuitive for readers to get the general sense of what the topic(Dama) actually is. A minor suggestion would be maybe consider defining the term Dama first so that readers with no prior knowledge could understand it better.