User:Guancong lance li/Chinese Dama/Kei Takahashi0512 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username)Guancong lance li


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * n.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Guancong%20lance%20li/Chinese_Dama?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)