User:Guisellemelchor/sandbox

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Comments from Heather
10/4- Guiselle- I found Patricia Krenwinkel (your Wikipedia person) on Biography in Context through the Butte College Library database. What I would do to start, is go there and read all you can on Patricia and COMPARE what's there to what Wikipedia has. If there are facts they don't have, add it (in your Sandbox). To access Biography in Context, go to our Introduction Week 5 page and click on the link for Biography in Context. There's also lots of good info on that Introduction page to review. Then search for Patricia in Biography in Context. Make sense?

Also, please fill in your work log with which citations you updated and anything else you worked on and how long you worked. That's how you get your score.

Finally I suggest you copy and paste the part of your article you want to improve into this Sandbox. (You can just create a new heading for it below, the way Amanda does in her Sandbox.) Then you can have me and other professionals look at it before you move it to the Wikipedia main space.

10/16- Great! Where did you add the quote and citation for Sharon Tates? You should copy the article in your Sandbox and add the quote here, not on the main Wikipedia page yet. Also see if there are images or Wikilinks that you can include for credit by 10/21.

Work Log

 * September 29, Added citations where they were missing (30 minutes)
 * October 14, Added a quote to that Sharon Tates, sister said about parole for Krenwinkel. It's under the heading of "Prison Life" here in my sandbox (30 minutes)
 * October 21, Added a before and after image of Patricia Krenwinkel (45 minutes)

Prison Life
In Krenwinkel's parole hearing on December 29, 2016, the decision was postponed to investigate the defense claim that Krenwinkel was suffering from battered woman syndrome at the hands of Manson during the time of the murders.[17] Sharon Tate's sister, Debra Tate said how Krenwinkel "...totally minimised her action and blamed everything on other people the whole hearing," she goes on to talk about how Krenwinkel was not a victim because she chose to participate in the murders and stay with the family so she should be accountable for her actions. The parole hearing resumed on June 22, 2017 when the 69-year-old Krenwinkel was denied parole.[18][19] She will be eligible to have another parole suitability hearing in five years. [20] After her 2017 review, Krenwinkel has been denied parole fourteen times.[21][22]