User:Gummycrown/Giant oarfish/Johnkim5206 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jack Manoog


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Gummycrown/Giant oarfish


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Giant oarfish

Evaluate the drafted changes
I really liked the addition of the Life Cycles section. This additional description gives me a better understanding about the early life cycle of the giant oarfish. I would suggest adding information about the life cycle outside of the lab and how these larvae develop into full grown adults.

I also really like the Description section that you added. It tells me a lot about the physical makeup of the organism. My suggestion is to rename the title section "Description" into "Morphology" since you extensively describe its anatomical features in this section.

Overall, your edits provide very detailed descriptions about the Giant oarfish and you add a lot of citations to support your statements. Great job!