User:Gupton99/Giant panda/Eb1002 Peer Review

I think you have a great outline to start. You named specific chemicals and their functions in different interactions. I am interested to see how your project develops.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Gupton


 * Link to draft you're reviewing https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Gupton99/Giant_panda?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists) Giant panda
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists) Giant panda

Evaluate the drafted changes
Your article has a great understanding of the topic and you have strong additions to the page. You have a few topics in your outline that you haven't covered yet but I think you will have a very strong finished product. The only thing I would add is a little more explanation when you mention a compound name or chemical pathway to make it easier for a reader that doesn't know much about the subject.