User:Gusk80/Maternal mortality ratio/Cmc343 Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Reviewing: Gusk80
 * Link: Maternal mortality ratio

Lead
Guiding questions:


 * There is not really a lead because it is the only paragraph in the article.
 * The opening sentence is confusing and does not make sense.
 * I do not think something could be considered a lead when it is the only paragraph in the whole article.

Content
Guiding questions:


 * Readers get very little information
 * Information provided does not seem relevant


 * One paragraph followed by long, confusing statistics

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * The content is neutral but there is just an overall lack of information.

Sources and References
Guiding questions:


 * The sources seem reliable.
 * The links work.

Organization
Guiding questions:


 * I do not think the content is easy to read.
 * I had to re-read the opening sentence numerous times and I still do not understand any point of the article.
 * It is not organized because there is little information.
 * The statistics are lengthy and difficult to follow.

Images and Media
Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media


 * There is one image that does nothing to add to the article.

For New Articles Only
If the draft you're reviewing is a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.


 * It has 2-3 sources that seem reliable, it is just lacking a lot of information.

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete?
 * What are the strengths of the content added?
 * How can the content added be improved?

Overall evaluation
This article needs a lot of work all around to be better. It is difficult to follow and understand and is extremely short with little information overall.