User:Gustavo1231/Palisade cell/Smildmo Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

You seem to have a good set of sources and a lot of promise with this article. I would recommend just making sure your new piece fits in well and you are able to make it flow with the rest of the article. Also, potentially add a picture to further emphasize your point.