User:Gvargas1oo/Hall Air Yacht/Gabbissmart720 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Gvargas1oo


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Gvargas1oo/Hall_Air_Yacht?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Gvargas1oo/Hall_Air_Yacht?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

Evaluate the drafted changes
There is not any edits within the sandbox but, there is a reference. I believe the idea of the topics is interesting. I think there should a portion where it mentions why people had built a "flying boat" I think there just needs a little more information.