User:Gwa19/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Samuel Galton Jr.

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because the information that was available seemed interesting, but it also had large room for improvement. I also find early English arms manufacturing very interesting.

Evaluate the article
The first notable problem I found with this page was the lack of sections breaking up the information.

It has only a lead section that could have more information. It seems to be a broad overview with almost no detail. It has nothing in the article's contents besides the lead section where all of the information has been summarized together. This could be broken up into career and family tabs where his career could be outlined, and wife and children could be listed. There is an image of Samuel, however there is no information in the caption of the image besides his name.

This very short article has a very neutral tone. The talk page is fairly bare with only one person commenting on the article. There are only two references on this page, and only two references cited within the article, so that section needs work as well.

I was left with many questions following reading this article, it has many content gaps that need to be filled in. I would consider this article very undeveloped and in need of more work.