User:Gwenf13/Dr. Autumn Asher BlackDeer/DavidMHuang12 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Gwenf13


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Gwenf13/Dr. Autumn Asher BlackDeer
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * User:Gwenf13/Dr. Autumn Asher BlackDeer

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Overall, your Wikipedia looks good! It has a lot of relevant information and each paragraph is well organized. You highlighted her work and the impact she makes within the community, allowing me to better understand why this person is significant. There are many linked topics and sources which is also great.

It would be great if you dove into her projects and explaining the impact she has made. More importantly, I would love to learn more about her project and better understand why she's passionate about what she does. I also noticed that the paragraph have all the necessary information, but they are a bit short--maybe you will find more info once you interview her. There is some redundancy in your page such as alma matter and education--I pretty much got the same information from both sections so I'm not sure if it's completely necessary.

Other than that, it looks great!