User:Gwenf13/Dr. Autumn Asher BlackDeer/Rky497 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Gwenf13


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Gwenf13/Dr._Autumn_Asher_BlackDeer?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * N/A

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

You did a ready great job at summarizing all of the information necessary to give me an image of who your uncommon leader is!

I would be sure to try to add a little bit more information in the introductory, maybe giving a blurb of her research/work. Some more description of Dr. BlackDeer in the introduction might bring more intrigue into the rest of the article in the later sections.

All of your information seems to be up-to-date, neutral, and relevant! You concentrate a lot on her education which is very descriptive and fleshed out. I would add some more specific information about her research and maybe more about her outreach work if you have the chance to speak to her.

Another note, try to play with and add some headers to make it better formatted to the Wikipedia! Also, look into adding categories! You have a really good foundation here, so just adding more information would have a great outcome for your page.