User:Gymshark4321/Discrimination based on skin color/Dreamer Jr. Peer Review

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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Gymshark4321/Discrimination based on skin color
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Evaluate the drafted changes

 * The lead section of this article does all of the necessary requirements, it provides a clear and concise overview of the entire article and it reflects the writers purpose of what the article is about. The content added to this article meets all of the requirements. It adds more to the article where there were gaps in their information and all of the sources are backed by creditable sources. While the articles are a bit older they still provide the necessary information of what the creator was trying to get through. The content added to the article is neutral, there is no bias indicted through any of the sentences added by the writer. The sources used by the writer are creditable, they used all together three sources, two for their section on talking about students of color and one for the racial wealth gap and how it connects to higher education. All in all I believe that this person added good and relevant points to the already existing article.