User:Gyrius/Rural society in China/Hannahazimi Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? Gyrius/Skylar
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: User:Gyrius/Rural society in China

Content

 * The content here is relevant to the overall topic regarding rural society. I think the sector addition with the TPA initiative are very insightful and useful for the topic.
 * I think it's great you added the subsection regarding the challenges with the TPA initiative. It makes your content that you've added more balanced in tone and information.

Tone and Balance

 * The tone of your writing is neutral and concise. I think you did a great job with your syntax!

Sources and References

 * The sources you have are all good based on my evaluation!
 * One thing: for the paragraph that you added to in the section "Collectivization and Class Status", make sure you add a footnote to indicate which source you are getting your information from.

Organization

 * The organization is well-thought out and easy to follow! I think that for someone (such as myself) who does not know much about rural society in China, your additions were very helpful in the overall understanding and instruction of the topic.

Overall impressions

 * I think that overall, the additions to the article that you have made are very useful. The discussion regarding the TPA initiative, as well as its challenges, was very easy to follow and informative. Overall, good job on your article contributions!