User:Gyte75/sandbox

User:Winterysteppe|Winterysteppe, You added some information, but the section Dealings with the Ottoman Empire and first reign (1448) doesn't make any sense now. I will sum up a few points It would be nice if you made some adjustments.
 * First of all, the text isn't chronological.
 * The text mentions, that Vlad's father himself went to the Ottoman sultan, and made a deal with, but after that you write, that he was tricked into a confrontation with the sultan, by which his sons were taken prisoner.
 * The sultan who Vlad's father confronted, has to be sultan Murad II, not his son Mehmed II, because in 1442 Mehmed II wasn't in reign.
 * The text mentions, that young Dracula spent some time in 1443 in Constantinople in the court of Constantine XI Paleologus. This is very unlikely, because wasn't he a prisoner of the Ottomans by then.
 * You didn't write anything about Vlad's father and Vlad's older brother Mircea being killed by boyars, who were supported by John Hunyadi, who then installed Vladislav II as his puppet ruler on the throne of Wallachia. After which the Ottomans released Vlad and gave him military support to take over the throne of Wallachia.